3/30/07

An Achievement

Once I wrote a poem and i got severely criticized by my friends for writing childish stuff.I never tried the same again. After a few months, I wrote a few lines about her. I posted those lines in this fateful blog. The same guys who criticized me came back and said that this time my Poetry was better.

I was surprised to see that they considered it Poetry(It seemed poetry to them). However, I was happy on not being criticized this time. My happiness was justified when She told me that it was a good poem. It seemed that some line had deeply struck her mind.
I never cared about the comments, nor about the criticism. If i could write any crap that would make her praise me. I'll do it even if this world criticizes me, because to me, she is the world. Afterall what is the use of a million people praising you when your loved one does not admire it?

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At 8:45 PM, Blogger Anooja said...

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At 8:46 PM, Blogger Anooja said...

hey ashwin, has the common man stopped dreaming ???

 
At 9:54 AM, Blogger Aswin Kini said...

Hi Anooja,
No the common man has not stopped dreaming. The common man is just confused on what to blog about?

 

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